Saturday, September 08, 2007

I'm Attracted

What's the need for Sight
If there's absence of light
Your beauty's dazzling
But no one's harnessing
You're helplessly attractive
Uniquely distinctive
My Glance caught yours
And I can't look away
You're like an open door
I can't ask for a better day.
Although we do not speak
There is a flow of communication
Your Body and soul beckons
Like we're meant to be
A call I must answer
Because there's more to see

I try hard to resist the feeling
But it's worthless
It’s like trying to stay dry on a rainy day
Without an umbrella.
The vacuum in my heart is filling
Volts of excitement
Flowing through my body
For a moment I don't understand myself
I can't control the mechanism of my system
All because I looked into your eyes.

This is one temptation
I cannot overcome
In your eyes I found Redemption
From sadness and boredom
Like two magnets, we attract
I hope I can feel this much longer
As I take every minute slowly
Creating a memorable experience
I don't know if this is Love
And I cannot tell
But one thing I know for sure
I'm attracted.



Is this original? If so, it is very good. Congrats!

Thanks for stopping by my blog. COme by often, oh!

wande said...

Attraction is like a sweet wine that leave its victims intoxicated with myriad of illusive thoughts.

But, not all that glitter is GOLD.

100%Lighty said...

yet another poet in the house. beautifully written. wuld like to read more.

Onada said...

hmmm what lady was lucky enough to have this written for her :) ?

Xdos said...

a good one bro...
I never knew ma brother was this good in luv...
Marc Anthony II

Igo said...

WoW so original.
Dear Oracle,
I'm a fan.
Thanks for stopping by.

femme said...

i liked this. it felt very soothing. don't know why i thought that.


no fear
once she reads this, she is yours
trust me

(but tell me, na u right am true true)

Oracle said...

Thanx everyone.
Yes, it is original.
Itz the second poem i've written in September.

All poetic works on the The Oracle's Corner are the original works of the author.

OUI C'EST MOI said...

i am attracted to your blog..

Anonymous said...

really digging your blog... your words

Sparkle said...

This na temptation
with a litle confusion...infatuation!
lol...nice poem

pamelastitch said...

biko,go and get the gal, abegi...

Annengineer said...

your blog font is fantabulous..can i steal it.

Teva said...

you've got some rhymes there you need a manager? I fit o! ...LOL
Thanks for dropping by.

Isi said...

all these words for someone you haven't spoken to yet?! please remember to share the whirlwind tales with us (in poetry please!) when you finally get the courage to tell your 'thoughts' to her. nice!

Jaycee said...

beautiful...and when u said, "I try hard to resist the feeling, but it's worthless. It’s like trying to stay dry on a rainy day
without an umbrella," I just started melting...

Jaybabe said...

Very nice. It's all i can say for now

Will be back!

DiAmOnD hawk said...

very nice!

Kafo said...


i like
i felt it
the gaze

~Mimi~ said...

that attraction sounds strong!



Queen Ebong said...

Very well written

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