What's the need for Sight
If there's absence of light
Your beauty's dazzling
But no one's harnessing
You're helplessly attractive
Uniquely distinctive
My Glance caught yours
And I can't look away
You're like an open door
I can't ask for a better day.
Although we do not speak
There is a flow of communication
Your Body and soul beckons
Like we're meant to be
A call I must answer
Because there's more to see
I try hard to resist the feeling
But it's worthless
It’s like trying to stay dry on a rainy day
Without an umbrella.
The vacuum in my heart is filling
Volts of excitement
Flowing through my body
For a moment I don't understand myself
I can't control the mechanism of my system
All because I looked into your eyes.
This is one temptation
I cannot overcome
In your eyes I found Redemption
From sadness and boredom
Like two magnets, we attract
I hope I can feel this much longer
As I take every minute slowly
Creating a memorable experience
I don't know if this is Love
And I cannot tell
But one thing I know for sure
I'm attracted.
22 comments:
Is this original? If so, it is very good. Congrats!
Thanks for stopping by my blog. COme by often, oh!
Attraction is like a sweet wine that leave its victims intoxicated with myriad of illusive thoughts.
But, not all that glitter is GOLD.
yet another poet in the house. beautifully written. wuld like to read more.
hmmm what lady was lucky enough to have this written for her :) ?
a good one bro...
I never knew ma brother was this good in luv...
Marc Anthony II
WoW so original.
Dear Oracle,
I'm a fan.
Thanks for stopping by.
i liked this. it felt very soothing. don't know why i thought that.
no fear
once she reads this, she is yours
trust me
(but tell me, na u right am true true)
Thanx everyone.
Yes, it is original.
Itz the second poem i've written in September.
All poetic works on the The Oracle's Corner are the original works of the author.
i am attracted to your blog..
really digging your blog... your words
This na temptation
with a litle confusion...infatuation!
lol...nice poem
biko,go and get the gal, abegi...
your blog font is fantabulous..can i steal it.
you've got some rhymes there brother...do you need a manager? I fit o! ...LOL
Thanks for dropping by.
all these words for someone you haven't spoken to yet?! please remember to share the whirlwind tales with us (in poetry please!) when you finally get the courage to tell your 'thoughts' to her. nice!
beautiful...and when u said, "I try hard to resist the feeling, but it's worthless. It’s like trying to stay dry on a rainy day
without an umbrella," I just started melting...
Very nice. It's all i can say for now
Will be back!
hmmmm
i like
i felt it
the gaze
hmmmm
that attraction sounds strong!
Very well written
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