Thursday, January 31, 2008

My Jewel, My Pride

Guarded earnestly by swords of steel
Like a door beneath the seal
My Jewel, my fortune to treasure
Unflinching to the whims of lustful pleasure
Young and free as the air
Wild and unaware
Of the evil that lurks in the dark
Unwilling to be taken aback
I crave for adventure
But I was taught to resist temptation
To stand firm for what is right

Designed with a pure heart
Made in his image and likeness
My incorruptible heart will not compromise
To offer my most intimate embrace
My virginity, my pride
The wonder of my world
That has not yet been explored
I'm determined to keep this treasure of mine
For my body is God's temple

My wisdom of purity
Is foolishness to my peers
Sometimes I feel I'm left behind
But a gentle voice resonates from within
Telling me to hold on
This Jewel of mine will remain guarded
Until the ordained time
When I shall look into the eyes of my other half
And make the vow
The only one who fills my heart with bliss
Who will fulfill my desires
But until then, My Jewel will be unknown to humanity

15 comments:

lindwee said...

Abstinence Oyeee!!!
I like the musicality this poem.

Pink-satin said...

wow! nice one

Today's ranting said...

Wow!really nice poem.u've got great writing skills.My first time here and i'm loving ur blog. I Will definatelY visit again.You are a handsome dude! wink.

desperate lady said...

I'd rather u whisper this poem in ma ears n put me to bed.
Good job.

SET said...

AWW THIS IS SO SWEET.

Jaybabe said...

Wow! O, as always, you've just made my day. I wish i had a mind like yours. Cant wait to see what you are gonna write for V-day. Or the day doesnt exists in you?..lol..jokin'..

But this was a very nive piece sonn! Well done!

SOLOMONSYDELLE said...

As usual, all I can say is nice....

Life said...

ur poems are inspiring buddy and which brings me here again and again.....
inspirational and revealing style of writting

Olamild said...

Hey dearie

how have u been?

mydestiny said...

nice work! keep it up.

Jaycee said...

*Sigh*

The description is so authentic and pure...love this poem and it's reality!!!! As usual! U know I luh ur poems...lol.

Lighty said...

nicely nicely done. fantastic stuff. i love this. and like DL said. ill like it whispered too. any hope?

Anonymous said...

I AM REALLY SHORT OF WORDS FOR THIS...YOU ARE REALLY VERY GOOD...JUST KEEP IT UP ...KELLY

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thom said...

A wonderful poem and a wise message.. a song of strange but pleasing tounge..in tavern or temple i'd hear it sung.