You were that friend that stuck to me like glue
The one who made me smile whenever I felt blue
Your shadow behind assured me of your presence
To share your heart, I needed no License.
You were determined to be more than just a friend
The signs were clear
But I refused to see them
Uncertain of my affinity for you
I saw Love as a burden
Another cause for worry
To send you flowers
To hear your voice in the middle of the night
To show affection I did not feel
My idea of Love was erroneous
It’s a different story when a girl is in Love
I don’t know if I swept you off your feet
Or made your heart skip a beat
But I know my existence made you feel special
The thought of someone loving you made your day
You showed in every way possible that you were in Love
I knew I had found something special
A Jewel to treasure
A fortune to cherish
You proved yourself worthy of Love
I could not but Succumb to your magnetism
I had fallen for your Charm
I wanted to remain captive
Now I can look deep in your eyes and say those words.
(This is meant to be my Valentine Post)
36 comments:
Nice poem, some girl is lucky...
Ol' boy, just realized I haven't seen you around in a while, so I came to check in on you. Hope all is well!
Oracle, u fell in love with a girl who fell in love with u first? If this happened in real life, then that's cute...
Or else u just have a crazy fantastic imagination...
nice poem
lovely.
okay
u need to get out of my head
PERIOD. it is like you are taking my thoughts are describing them so poignantly
hmmmm
okay i am no longer mad at u
happy easter
AND WHAT DID SHE SAY?.....
Good to know you are preparing for school. You will be fine, God will guide you.
Wel, take care and when you get some time, blog and let us all now how things are going, okay?
NIGERIAN CURIOSITY
IT WAS SO MUCH EASIER WHEN I ONLY HAD ONE...
Hi Oracle
Thanks for visiting my blog.
You write beautifully. I heard a peom on FM few days ago, will publish on my blog, hope u will like it.
Best wishes, hope you had an enjoyable easter
Oh jeezzzz
It's not Valentine and I am feeling love in the air.
Can u believe i actually sang this post...
after reading the first line
i developed a rhythm
and ehmmmm this is a beautiful work of art.
You write very well.
Do you sing?
how sweet,
pammy colored in envy
hmm. i hate poetry.they dont make sense to me.but most pple like em
wow! Nicely written.I love ur choice of words.You are such a witty writer.
"Thatz nice, keep being focused.
But i must say that there's a kind of attraction between the both of you which if you allow to grow will be the obsession of your soul.
I think your fate lies in your attitude towards him, if you give him reason to believe that you like him or that you'll answer when he calls. Then you just gotta be ready to pick that call.
March 24, 2008 12:39 AM"
This is the post you left on my blog and it made me do some serious reevaluating. I took it to mean that I have to consciously make a decision if I want or don't want something. I did. Thank you.
Beautiful piece.
What if...
;)
Cheers.
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww
hey this time to party....
someone is in love with u and you too are.........its party time...
God bless you both and shower all happiness in your life
Take Care
vIkAs{V}
You were the friend that taught me how to share
You were there when no else was near....
Abi make i continue?
I like this poem of yours
nice poem oracle men! its beautiful the way the creative mind works. you've got a bundle of talent bro. keep it real
nice post
Very nice piece.
Hey boy!
How have you been? Long time no see.
u never update?
Oracle hi, quite a while.
Valentine in March...hmn I'm cool with that :)
Where u dey?...any other poems for us?
"You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give."
~ Kahlil Gibran
Oracle, your thoughts on a loving relationship are good for meditation.
There no true love without sacrifice.
Cheers and God bless.
1st time on here. will be back!! btw welcome!!
A Jewel to treasure
A fortune to cherish
You proved yourself worthy of Love
I could not but Succumb to your magnetism
I had fallen for your Charm
I wanted to remain captive
Now I can look deep in your eyes and say those words...
Wow, what a lucky duo...
she loves you;you love her...
I like you're poetry.
I Shall Be Back
awwwwwwwwww howww sweeet. beautiful, beautifull.
You're sure very talented! I like them!
i was having an arguement with a friend of mine weda it's worth it 4 a chick 2 b in love with a man who's dragging his feet in d hope dat one day he'd turn around & love her. i felt it was just an unnecessarily waste of energy (having been dai & knowing dat it ddnt easy o), but she sited examples of where a dude had married women they weren't exactly crazy abt d initial time.
it appears u have proved her argument right.
She's so lucky
BIUTIFUL...LOL
THE PEOM TUGS AT THE HEART
Veru B'tful.
where r u?
Na wa o...where u dey. You just peeked through my blog and pheewwww! Anyways me tagged you o, so that will force you to blog.
Hey buddy....i feel your words..Apt and beautiful for me to reckon with ........More oil ....
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