Friday, March 21, 2008

Loving your Love

You were that friend that stuck to me like glue
The one who made me smile whenever I felt blue
Your shadow behind assured me of your presence
To share your heart, I needed no License.
You were determined to be more than just a friend
The signs were clear
But I refused to see them
Uncertain of my affinity for you
I saw Love as a burden
Another cause for worry
To send you flowers
To hear your voice in the middle of the night
To show affection I did not feel
My idea of Love was erroneous

It’s a different story when a girl is in Love
I don’t know if I swept you off your feet
Or made your heart skip a beat
But I know my existence made you feel special
The thought of someone loving you made your day
You showed in every way possible that you were in Love
I knew I had found something special
A Jewel to treasure
A fortune to cherish
You proved yourself worthy of Love
I could not but Succumb to your magnetism
I had fallen for your Charm
I wanted to remain captive
Now I can look deep in your eyes and say those words.


(This is meant to be my Valentine Post)

37 comments:

Ollay said...

Nice poem, some girl is lucky...

SOLOMONSYDELLE said...

Ol' boy, just realized I haven't seen you around in a while, so I came to check in on you. Hope all is well!

Jaycee said...

Oracle, u fell in love with a girl who fell in love with u first? If this happened in real life, then that's cute...

Or else u just have a crazy fantastic imagination...

'Yar Mama said...

nice poem

Uzezi said...

lovely.

Kafo said...

okay

u need to get out of my head

PERIOD. it is like you are taking my thoughts are describing them so poignantly

hmmmm
okay i am no longer mad at u

happy easter

Ms. Catwalq said...

AND WHAT DID SHE SAY?.....

SOLOMONSYDELLE said...

Good to know you are preparing for school. You will be fine, God will guide you.

Wel, take care and when you get some time, blog and let us all now how things are going, okay?


NIGERIAN CURIOSITY
IT WAS SO MUCH EASIER WHEN I ONLY HAD ONE...

Ever Hopeful said...

Hi Oracle

Thanks for visiting my blog.

You write beautifully. I heard a peom on FM few days ago, will publish on my blog, hope u will like it.

Best wishes, hope you had an enjoyable easter

Olamild said...

Oh jeezzzz
It's not Valentine and I am feeling love in the air.

Can u believe i actually sang this post...
after reading the first line
i developed a rhythm
and ehmmmm this is a beautiful work of art.

You write very well.
Do you sing?

pamela said...

how sweet,

pammy colored in envy

anonymous gal said...

hmm. i hate poetry.they dont make sense to me.but most pple like em

Today's ranting said...

wow! Nicely written.I love ur choice of words.You are such a witty writer.

YankeeNaija said...

"Thatz nice, keep being focused.
But i must say that there's a kind of attraction between the both of you which if you allow to grow will be the obsession of your soul.
I think your fate lies in your attitude towards him, if you give him reason to believe that you like him or that you'll answer when he calls. Then you just gotta be ready to pick that call.

March 24, 2008 12:39 AM"

This is the post you left on my blog and it made me do some serious reevaluating. I took it to mean that I have to consciously make a decision if I want or don't want something. I did. Thank you.

AlooFar said...

Beautiful piece.

What if...

;)

Cheers.

Honeywell said...

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! this is so beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Pink-satin said...

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww

Life said...

hey this time to party....

someone is in love with u and you too are.........its party time...

God bless you both and shower all happiness in your life

Take Care
vIkAs{V}

Olamild said...

You were the friend that taught me how to share
You were there when no else was near....

Abi make i continue?

I like this poem of yours

Sasuke said...

nice poem oracle men! its beautiful the way the creative mind works. you've got a bundle of talent bro. keep it real

nice post

Jaybabe said...

Very nice piece.

Hey boy!

How have you been? Long time no see.

Uzezi said...

u never update?

30+ said...

Oracle hi, quite a while.

Valentine in March...hmn I'm cool with that :)

Ollay said...

Where u dey?...any other poems for us?

Orikinla Osinachi. said...

"You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give."
~ Kahlil Gibran

Oracle, your thoughts on a loving relationship are good for meditation.

There no true love without sacrifice.

Cheers and God bless.

The experiences of an achiever....... said...

1st time on here. will be back!! btw welcome!!

curvyice said...

A Jewel to treasure
A fortune to cherish
You proved yourself worthy of Love
I could not but Succumb to your magnetism
I had fallen for your Charm
I wanted to remain captive
Now I can look deep in your eyes and say those words...

Wow, what a lucky duo...
she loves you;you love her...

La Reine said...

I like you're poetry.

I Shall Be Back

Lighty said...

awwwwwwwwww howww sweeet. beautiful, beautifull.

jinnyk said...

You're sure very talented! I like them!

Free-flowing Florida said...

i was having an arguement with a friend of mine weda it's worth it 4 a chick 2 b in love with a man who's dragging his feet in d hope dat one day he'd turn around & love her. i felt it was just an unnecessarily waste of energy (having been dai & knowing dat it ddnt easy o), but she sited examples of where a dude had married women they weren't exactly crazy abt d initial time.

it appears u have proved her argument right.

lindwee said...

She's so lucky

tankojjetty said...

BIUTIFUL...LOL
THE PEOM TUGS AT THE HEART

AlooFar said...

Veru B'tful.

Olamild said...

where r u?

Ollay said...

Na wa o...where u dey. You just peeked through my blog and pheewwww! Anyways me tagged you o, so that will force you to blog.

TRYBES said...

Hey buddy....i feel your words..Apt and beautiful for me to reckon with ........More oil ....